Thursday, June 22, 2006

Please, Baby


It’s been driving me crazy all day
It's right there,
In the middle.
If I twist my arm just right
I can kind of reach it with my fingertips.
But, not enough
Not enough to ease my torment.
If you gave me a hand
Sunk your nails into my flesh
I’d tell you exactly where to scratch.
It would feel perfect

Divinely satisfying.
Please, Baby
Please.

16 Comments:

At 10:30 PM, Blogger Yoga Korunta said...

I've said that, too!

 
At 3:23 AM, Blogger something from me said...

Ok babe,
Show me where.

Thanks for the comment on my blog. You keep reading, and I'll keep writing.

Please feel free to add a link to my site at any time, and I'll return the favour.

Steve

 
At 7:49 AM, Blogger i used to be me said...

of course i expected something different when I saw your illustration...cute Ms T :)

 
At 7:50 AM, Blogger Unknown said...

T-
Just a matter of time...

 
At 9:31 AM, Blogger AndyT13 said...

Well you're certainly raching the groove with your writing! Rock on T!

 
At 9:32 AM, Blogger Steve said...

I have this awful habit of biting my nails...but maybe you can still feel it. :)

 
At 9:35 AM, Blogger Spin_Doc1 said...

Great visual, inspired by your words.

 
At 11:05 AM, Blogger nosthegametoo said...

There's nothing like that feeling.

Once again, excellent.

 
At 2:56 PM, Blogger Polyman2 said...

Sometimes,
it's unreachable.

 
At 3:57 PM, Blogger Joy said...

Can I borrow this one t?

 
At 5:44 PM, Blogger Theresa said...

Yoga – An all-too-common experience.

Steve – Nice to know I can count on you.

UGenius – What are you implying?

Al – I better not ask what you’re implying.

Andy – I’ve been recently inspired.

Steve – As long as they aren’t all jaggedy.

Spin – I changed it after I added the picture. It didn’t need as many words.

Nosthegametoo – The torment or the satisfaction?

Laurie – Good one!

Poly – It’s good to have helpful friends.

Joy – It depends ... Are you still feeling like a dirty girl?

 
At 7:55 PM, Blogger No_the_game said...

Thanks for the advise my lovely lady. God, I love the way you think. I have never thought that way. I wished I have a gram of your wisdom :)

A nice poem !!!

 
At 6:25 AM, Blogger Helene said...

ohhh I loved it!! I also think the illustration was perfect!

cheers!

 
At 8:21 PM, Blogger ZooooM said...

Awesome. T, I hope all of your itches get scratched.

 
At 8:34 PM, Blogger Theresa said...

NoTheGame - You are always so flattering. It's just because I've been around so long that it seems like I know stuff.

QoP - Yep, I think I do.

Kate - Thanks. The pic was a happy accident.

Dick - ... and you're obviously a sensual guy.

Zoooomster - Thanks. Me too.

 
At 11:54 AM, Blogger Michelle said...

I had a comment, but everyone took what I was going to say. That's what I get for piping in so late in the game. :/

 

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