Saturday, June 03, 2006

Making Love to the Moon

While looking for you
In the waxing moon,

I happened upon a smile
You gave me yesterday,

Wondered if I’ll ever know you
When you were a child,

Heard your far away voice
Dancing in my ear,

O’ night sky,
Bathing my pale skin

In damp whispers.
Stealing my breath
With drifting phantom fingers.

I lie naked beneath you
Earnestly impatient,
Inhaling your abundance,
Exhaling a wish, a dream, my love.

17 Comments:

At 1:59 PM, Blogger ZooooM said...

I like this line(s):

I happened upon a smile
You gave me yesterday

 
At 3:01 PM, Blogger i used to be me said...

beautiful

 
At 3:17 PM, Blogger Steve said...

splendid...very good, T.

 
At 3:47 PM, Blogger Theresa said...

Zoooom - That's my favorite too.

U-Genius - Thank you. I didn't know if anyone would comment on this poem. It's a little racy. Thank you.

Steve - Thanks, Sweetie.

VGP - Why yes, thanks for the beautiful comment.

 
At 7:02 AM, Blogger Joy said...

Someone's waxing poetic today. ;) This was beautiful T.

 
At 5:13 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

(i like phantom fingers)

 
At 10:17 PM, Blogger Barry said...

nice poetry

 
At 8:07 AM, Blogger Spin_Doc1 said...

It sounds like someone special has entered your life.

 
At 8:48 AM, Blogger Theresa said...

Joy - Is there such a thing as "waxing sappy"?
That's more my speed.

Popeye - those fingers make you tingle?

Barry - Thanks, Babe!

SpinDoc - That's one possibility ... or maybe I'm just imagining things again.

 
At 10:51 PM, Blogger Casey said...

This is beautiful.

 
At 10:57 AM, Blogger nosthegametoo said...

Thank you for mooning us all Theresa.

Such a beautiful sight.

 
At 3:30 PM, Blogger Bougie Black Boy said...

very well written. . . your poetry is always impressive

 
At 9:34 PM, Blogger Yoga Korunta said...

Happy 666!

 
At 12:14 PM, Blogger AndyT13 said...

Nice poem dearie!

word ver: DWIBOB

 
At 8:49 PM, Blogger Theresa said...

Casey - Thank you

Nosthegametoo - Ha! Even more true if anyone had been around during the composition of this particular poem.

Stephen - and your flattery inspires me even more.

Yoga - happiness to you too

Andy - Thanks Baby!

 
At 10:20 PM, Blogger Chick said...

Beautiful (made me feel like I was there).

 
At 8:14 AM, Blogger Polyman2 said...

I feel waxy.
Hey kiddo.

 

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