Saturday, June 03, 2006

Making Love to the Moon

While looking for you
In the waxing moon,

I happened upon a smile
You gave me yesterday,

Wondered if I’ll ever know you
When you were a child,

Heard your far away voice
Dancing in my ear,

O’ night sky,
Bathing my pale skin

In damp whispers.
Stealing my breath
With drifting phantom fingers.

I lie naked beneath you
Earnestly impatient,
Inhaling your abundance,
Exhaling a wish, a dream, my love.


At 1:59 PM, Blogger ZooooM said...

I like this line(s):

I happened upon a smile
You gave me yesterday

At 3:01 PM, Blogger Unacknowledged Genius said...


At 3:17 PM, Blogger Steve said...

splendid...very good, T.

At 3:33 PM, Blogger The Valley Girl Philosopher said...

Oh, the moon... she is one subtle seductress. She keeps that black and white sun honest. Oh my God! The valley girl has poetry in her! Woo-hoo!

At 3:47 PM, Blogger theresa said...

Zoooom - That's my favorite too.

U-Genius - Thank you. I didn't know if anyone would comment on this poem. It's a little racy. Thank you.

Steve - Thanks, Sweetie.

VGP - Why yes, thanks for the beautiful comment.

At 7:02 AM, Blogger joy said...

Someone's waxing poetic today. ;) This was beautiful T.

At 5:13 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

(i like phantom fingers)

At 10:17 PM, Blogger Barry said...

nice poetry

At 8:07 AM, Blogger Spin_Doc1 said...

It sounds like someone special has entered your life.

At 8:48 AM, Blogger theresa said...

Joy - Is there such a thing as "waxing sappy"?
That's more my speed.

Popeye - those fingers make you tingle?

Barry - Thanks, Babe!

SpinDoc - That's one possibility ... or maybe I'm just imagining things again.

At 10:51 PM, Blogger Casey said...

This is beautiful.

At 10:57 AM, Blogger nosthegametoo said...

Thank you for mooning us all Theresa.

Such a beautiful sight.

At 3:30 PM, Blogger Bougie Black Boy said...

very well written. . . your poetry is always impressive

At 9:34 PM, Blogger Yoga Korunta said...

Happy 666!

At 12:14 PM, Blogger AndyT13 said...

Nice poem dearie!

word ver: DWIBOB

At 8:49 PM, Blogger theresa said...

Casey - Thank you

Nosthegametoo - Ha! Even more true if anyone had been around during the composition of this particular poem.

Stephen - and your flattery inspires me even more.

Yoga - happiness to you too

Andy - Thanks Baby!

At 4:39 AM, Blogger Laurie said...

Awesome poem, T :-)

There is nothing more sensual than lying (laying? I always forget, lol) nekkid outside under the moon's glow..

At 10:20 PM, Blogger Chick said...

Beautiful (made me feel like I was there).

At 8:14 AM, Blogger Polyman2 said...

I feel waxy.
Hey kiddo.


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