Tuesday, February 14, 2006

Un-Fairytale

Once upon a time,
Your voice was forever in my ear.
I could hear you talking to me
Even when you were miles away.
Now, when you’re next to me,
I have to strain to hear you.
What was that you said?
Was it "hello"
Or "goodbye"?

Ever after

12 Comments:

At 8:58 AM, Blogger Larry Jones said...

So typical and sad, how we can't seem to speak clearly to one another.

 
At 9:14 AM, Blogger Spin_Doc1 said...

Good stuff.

 
At 9:27 AM, Blogger naive-no-more said...

Good gracious! Will you get out of my head already!!!!

 
At 9:52 AM, Blogger Dick the Boomer said...

Maybe it can still end "Happily...

 
At 11:12 AM, Blogger Polyman2 said...

Sounds like it's so over.

 
At 2:26 PM, Blogger Bougie Black Boy said...

I love this---BUT
I would just simply call this "Fairy tale" forget the "un" part of it.

This was disturbingly sweet.

 
At 4:00 PM, Blogger Al said...

still the best T

 
At 6:49 PM, Blogger Shephard said...

This is about you and George Clooney, isn't it.

Poignant and lovely writing as always.
~S

 
At 9:41 PM, Blogger Chick said...

Sometimes they leave...without leaving.

 
At 9:15 AM, Blogger AndyT13 said...

Nice poem. I should have named my HNT This Little Piggy! Meanwhile we all still await you gracing us with some artsy HNT girlie. :-)
Love ya!

 
At 10:02 AM, Blogger JayneSays said...

been (am?) there : (

 
At 11:10 AM, Blogger Brea said...

I love chick's comment. So true.

 

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